Do You See What I See?
I'm a visual writer; I like to imagine a scene playing out like a movie in my head before I put it 'on paper.' A problem with this is that I'll fail to adequately transcribe my imagined scene onto the printed page. It can be difficult during self-editing to filter out what I've already visualized (i.e., to put myself in the reader's shoes and only 'see' what the words describe). Since I've already 'pictured' what happens, my brain fills in the pieces that my words haven't adequately detailed, and even though I'm imagining a completed scene in my head based on what I'm reading, what's actually on the page has gaps. I've developed a 'trick' to help myself with this problem. It's nothing complicated and is extremely simple, if not overtly obvious, but I've found it does help me. After I've finished writing a scene, I'll do a re-read with a piece of scrap paper handy. As I'm reading, I sketch...