I'm Releasing a 2nd Edition. Here's Why:
In August 2012 (about 20 months ago), I self-published my epic fantasy novel Crimson & Cream , first book in The Oxbow Kingdom Trilogy. Since then, I've written book two of the series; Mirrors & Mist. Because Crimson & Cream was originally edited in the late 1990s, I needed a new editor for Mirrors & Mist. Since it's the second book of the series, I asked my new editor (the talented +R.J. Blain ) to read Crimson & Cream in preparation for the second book. Not surprisingly, she had plenty of great suggestions for Crimson & Cream, which I decided to incorporate into a new edition of the novel. Although the core plot of Crimson & Cream remains the same, the way the story is told changed in many subtle, but significant ways. With the guidance of my editor, I addressed the following major weaknesses: Replaced the abundant 'head-hopping' with consistent point-of-view (POV) scenes. Removed a large amount of information dumps. Improved imm...